J. Wilder

This version is way better. You did a good job making changes. quote]I see the boy who called me a loser.[/quote] Since you edited that line, this needs to be ...

I like it, but you switch back and forth between tenses--choose one. Also there are a couple typos. But it's interesting and I like the voice of the character. Post ...

I really like it so far and want to read more. I would critique it but I have to go in like less than five minutes so I'll come back ...

Thanks for the response. Wow, it's been forever since I posted this...However I would like to post more now because I'm sort of trying to start writing this again. Right ...

What's Jake, Reinvented about? It's a retelling of The Great Gatsby , about high school.

The reason that I read Korman is that he's often hilarious. I don't like it when he tries to be semi-serious (i.e., Jake, Reinvented and the Island series and other ...

Was it funny, though?

It was the one where these two boys keep trying to escape from camp. I think it's called I Want to Go Home . I haven't read that one, though.

Is it good? I want to read it because a long time ago some people critiquing something I wrote said it reminded them of Bret Easton Ellis.

Wow, you've got two Canadian authors up there. Yeah. I'm Canadian. I've lived in the U.S. all my life so far but when I'm eighteen or older I might move ...

books: I prefer Harry Potter movies: I prefer Lord of the Rings

Thanks for the replies, you guys. I cut the stuff about his parents being hippies and all. Here is more of Chapter 2. This is where some of the major ...

CHAPTER 2 MADELINE By second semester of the seventh grade, it had been five and a half years since I’d started at St. Joseph Hall. My aunt had recommended it. ...

Hi, Sam. Yeah, I left Real Kids...like everybody says a lot of it was just pointless chatting instead of critiquing, and I e-mailed Deborah Morris to ask for more detailed ...

Thanks for the comments, you guys. This is the rest of the first chapter: # My parents sent me out of the state because she said so. It was insane! ...